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ENG 1103: Sample Analyses

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For today’s class, you read and annotated “Wait Means Never,” an analysis of Martin Luther King Jr.’s “Letter from Birmingham Jail,” written for English 1103 in a previous semester.

Today in class, you and two or three of your classmates will collaborate on an assessment of “Wait Means Never” that addresses both the content and the form of the analysis. You will also examine a second student analysis–one that I will distribute in class–which focuses on a passage in Tara Westover’s memoir Educated (2018).

As you assess the student analyses, pay close attention to both the assignment guidelines and the grade criteria. Ask yourselves whether each essay includes all of the following elements:

  • A title that offers a window into your analysis
  • An introduction that presents a summary of the text
  • A thesis statement, or main claim, that presents your take on the text based on your close study of it
  • Textual evidence that supports your claims
  • A minimum of two relevant quotations from the text, introduced with signal phrases and followed by parenthetical citations
  • A conclusion that revisits the thesis without restating it verbatim
  • A work cited entry 
  • A minimum of 600 words

Keep in mind that A and B essays must include all of the elements listed above.

In addition to reading and annotating “Wait Means Never” for today, you examined the page of Art Spiegelman‘s graphic memoir Maus posted in the readings folder on Blackboard, and noted in your journal what elements of the page you might address if you were writing an analysis of it. Time permitting, after we discuss your assessments of “Wait Means Never” and “Princess of the Rock,” we will examine my analysis, “The Strange Fruit of Sosnowiec.”

Spiegelman, Art. Maus I. Pantheon, 1986. p. 83.

Next Up

In class on Wednesday, you will compose a short reflective essay focusing on the process of planning, drafting, and revising your analysis. If you are still in the process of completing your essay on Wednesday (since you have until Friday morning’s hard deadline to post it), your reflection will address your work in progress.

Before class, review the sections of the textbook, Writing Analytically, that have guided you in the writing of your analysis:

  • “Focus on Individual Words and Sentences” (48-49).
  • “How Long?: Paragraphs, Readers, and Writers” (308). 
  • “‘Interesting,’ ‘Revealing,’ ‘Strange’” (24). 
  • “Seems to Be About X, But Could Also Be (Or is ‘Really’) About Y’” (104-7). 
  • “What a Good Analytical Thesis Is and Does” (242-42).
  • “Words Matter” (49-50).

After you have reviewed those sections of Writing Analytically, choose a phrase, clause, or sentence relevant to your writing process and draft in your journal a short passage that connects that quotation to your writing. That passage will serve as part of your reflection. Detailed instructions for composing your reflection and including your chosen quotation will be included on the assignment handout that I distribute on Wednesday. Remember to bring your textbook to class.

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Weathering Storms

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For the Women of The Vagina Monologues, Camel City Playhouse 2026

Finding myself rehearsing again for The Vagina Monologues carried me back to the last time I performed in it, only weeks before the pandemic shutdown. As I stood on stage, saying, “I was there in the room,” I had no idea that our lives were about to be confined to rooms—for maddening months on end.

While we sheltered in place—on the edge of the apocalypse, it seemed—the playwright V, formerly known as Eve Ensler, spoke with writer Jemimah Steinfeld about a new version of her play Chamomile Tea, which depicts two women living behind masks as the result of nuclear fallout. V said to Steinfeld:

“‘Will you go out and risk getting ill? Will you live with freedom and potentially die [going outside] or will you live inside a gas mask where you can no longer eat, talk, or feel? What is it like living without touch, without connection to people, without community?’” (par. 6).

Although she was speaking of the imagined nuclear fallout of her Reagan-era play, V could have been referring to her own experience then, in 2020, or to ours. (Though we weren’t wearing gas masks, we were masked.)]

Minus the masks, we returned to that isolation in late January and early February when back-to-back stormageddons froze us in our tracks.

For many of us, driving to rehearsal meant long stretches on dark roads where we didn’t know what hazards might lie ahead. Those long stretches became less difficult when I reminded myself that those journeys were a metaphor. Such fear of the unknown is a daily part of the lives of the women V has honored with her monologues.

As I write these words, I can hear running water: the sound of the last remnants of the storms we have weathered. Women weather storms. V has documented them. And now we bring them to the stage.*

In sisterhood, Jane Lucas

Pussycat Narrator

I am grateful for the opportunity to perform by your side, and I hope we’ll have the chance to work together again.

Steinfeld Jemimah. “Masking the Truth: The Writer of the Vagina Monologues (Formerly Known as Eve Ensler) Speaks to Index About Attacks on the Truth. Plus a New Version of Her Play About Living in a Nuclear Wasteland.” Index on Censorship, vol. 49, no. 2, 2020, pp. 76–81, https://doi.org/10.1177/ 0306422020935356.

*And, fortunately, we won’t have to perform as an Ice Capades troupe.

The cast and production team for The Vagina Monologues, Camel City Playhouse, February 13-15, 2026 / Neal Jester Photography: https://neiljesterphotography.shootproof.com/.
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ENG 1103: Irritable Vowel Syndrome, Part I

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Knowing words with multiple vowels proves useful when you’re faced with a rack of mostly, or all, vowels. Here’s a list of the first twenty-two playable four-letter words with three vowels:

  • aeon: a long period of time (also eon)
  • agee: to one side (also ajee)
  • agio: a surcharge applied when exchanging currency
  • ague: a sickness associated with malaria
  • ajee: to one side (also agee)
  • akee: a tropical tree
  • alae: wings (pl. of ala)
  • alee: on the side shielded from wind
  • amia: a freshwater fish
  • amoa: a kind of small buffalo
  • awee: a little while
  • eaux: waters (pl. of eau)
  • eide: distinctive appearances of things (pl. of eidos)
  • emeu: an emu
  • etui: an ornamental case
  • euro: an Australian marsupial, also known as wallaroo, for being like the kangaroo and the wallaby; also a unified currency of much of Europe
  • ilea: the terminal portions of small intestines (pl. of ileum)
  • ilia: pelvic bones (pl. of ilium)
  • jiao: a Chinese currency (also chiao)
  • luau: a large Hawaiian feast
  • meou: to meow
  • moue: a pouting expression

Next Up

Wordplay Day! To prepare for class, revisit the Dictionary and World Builder pages on the Scrabble website, or Merriam-Webster Scrabble Word Finder page, and review the blog posts devoted to Scrabble tips, including this one.

Happy Spring Break!

After spring break, we will examine the student analysis “Wait Means Never,” which I distributed in class on February 18, and “The Strange Fruit of Sosnowiec,” my model analysis of a page of Art Spiegelman’s graphic memoir Maus, which I will distribute in class on March 2

Before class on Monday, March 2, read and annotate “Wait Means Never,” and study the page of Maus posted in the readings folder on Blackboard. As you examine the page, note in your journal what elements of the page you would address if you were writing an analysis of it.

If you were absent on February 18 or misplaced your copy of “Wait Means Never,” download a copy from Blackboard.

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ENG 1103: “The Falling Man” Revisited . . .

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Photo Credit: Richard Drew https://www.esquire.com/news-politics/a48031/the-falling-man-tom-junod/

Yesterday in class, before you began typing your revisions, I checked your journal exercises that addressed both the opening of “The Falling Man” and the textbook’s authors’ suggestions for paragraph writing. My version of that exercise follows.

The authors of Writing Analytically recommend that “[i]f you find a paragraph growing longer than half a page–particularly if it is your opening or second paragraph–find a place to make a paragraph break” (Rosenwasser and Stephen 308). Junod does not follow that advice in the opening of “The Falling Man.” He opts instead to begin his article with a paragraph of more than four hundred words.

If Junod had chosen to divide the first paragraph, where might he have divided it?

Junod might have started a second paragraph with the words “[i]n all the other pictures,” because there he shifts the focus from the Falling Man to the photographs of other people who jumped from the Twin Towers. An opportunity for a third paragraph comes with the words “[t]he man in the picture, by contrast,” where Junod turns his attention back to the Falling Man. And he might have begun a fourth paragraph with “[s]ome people who look at the picture,” because there he shifts to viewers’ perceptions of the Falling Man.

Generally, one hundred to one hundred and fifty words is a suitable paragraph length. As a rule, you should begin a new paragraph when you present a new idea or point. If you have an extended idea that spans multiple paragraphs, each new point within that idea should have its own paragraph. But the first paragraph of “The Falling Man” defies convention. For Junod, choosing not to divide the first paragraph creates an unbroken movement that parallels the unbroken downward flight of his subject, the Falling Man. Outside of the photograph, “he drops and keeps dropping until he disappears” (par. 1). With “disappears,” the last word of the paragraph,” the Falling Man disappears from the page, and Tom Junod turns to the photographer, whom we learn later in the essay is Richard Drew.

Works Cited

Junod, Tom. “The Falling Man.” Esquire, vol. 140, no. 3, Sept. 2003, pp. 176+. ProQuest, https://libproxy.highpoint.edu/login?url=https://www.proquest.com/ magazines/falling-man/docview/210268344/se-2.

Rosenwasser, David and Jill Stephen. “The Idea of the Paragraph.” Writing Analytically, 9th edition. Wadsworth/Cengage, 2024. pp. 307-313. 

“Anyone Who Had a Heart . . .”

Any of you who had hearts–paper ones with lace doilies, distributed last Friday–could have earned bonus assignment credit for composing a Valentine and posting an image of it on your blog. Kudos to Nick Beeker, Madsion Davis, Sophia Marin, Dylan Virga, and Sierra Welch for taking the initiative to create Valentine’s Day greetings for loved ones.

Nick Beeker, who titled his post “Valentines Day,” wrote, “This word filled heart was sent to my childhood best friend Cameron. As he is going off to boot camp for the Marines. I am very proud of him!”

Madison Davis, who titled her post “Happy Valentine’s Day <3,” wrote, “I made this valentine for my mom because she has been my valentine every year until this year, so now that we have moved on from the tradition of her getting me a valentine, I wanted to make her one to let her know that I am still thinking of her, even when I have my own valentine. Happy Valentine’s Day mom!”

Sophia Marin titled her post “A Valentines to My Best Friend.”

Dylan Virga, who titled his post “Happy Valentine’s Day,” wrote, “My friend is Brazilian, and back in the 2014 World Cup, Brazil lost to Germany 7-1 which is one of the worst blowouts in sports history. So I like to tease her about it every now and again.”

Sierra Welch titled her post “Valentine <3.”

Bonus Assignment Opportunity

Directions

  1. Determine which of the five Valentine’s posts is the strongest in terms of composition. Since each post features both an image of the hand-crafted card and its written text, think of the composition not solely as the words composed but instead as a combination of the words and image. You may also consider the writer’s commentary, where present, and the title of the blog post itself.
  2. Compose a comment of one complete sentence or more that includes (1) the first and last name of the writer, and (2) a brief explanation of the Valentine’s effectiveness.
  3. Post your comment as a reply to this blog entry no later than 9 a.m. tomorrow, Friday, February 20. (To post your comment, click on the post’s title, and scroll down to the bottom of the page. You will then see the image of an airmail envelope with a leave comment option.) 

I will approve your comments (make them visible) before Friday’s class.

Next Up

Wordplay Day! To prepare for class, revisit the Dictionary and World Builder pages on the Scrabble website, or the Merriam-Webster Scrabble Word Finder page, and review the blog posts devoted to Scrabble.

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ENG 1103: Revising Your Analysis

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After I check your journal exercises on the opening of Tom Junod’s “The Falling Man,” I will return your drafts with my notes, and you will have the remainder of the class period to begin revising your analyses on your laptops. Because next week is spring break, you will have two additional weeks to continue your revision work before you submit the assignment to Blackboard and publish it as a WordPress blog entry. The due date is Wednesday, March 4 (before class). The hard deadline is Friday, March 6 (before class). Directions for submitting your analysis are included on your assignment sheet and on the Blackboard submission site.

Analysis Draft Notes

I have attached to your analysis draft a handout of notes for you to review–along with my handwritten annotations–before you begin your revision work. An additional copy of those notes is included in yesterday’s blog post.

The Writing Center

As you continue to revise your analysis, consider visiting the Writing Center. If you do so, you will earn five bonus points for the assignment.

To schedule an appointment, register online here, email the Writing Center’s director, Professor Justin Cook, at jcook3@highpoint.edu, or scan the QR code below. To earn bonus points for your analysis, consult with a Writing Center tutor no later than Thursday, March 5.

Writing Center Consultations for Literacy Narratives

  • Section 8: 2 of 17 students, 11.7%

If you are one of the students who did not take advantage of the Writing Center when you were composing your literacy narrative, do not miss the opportunity to receive that guidance–and those bonus points–for your analysis, and later for your final essay and annotated bibliography.

Model Analysis

After spring break, we will examine the student sample analysis “Wait Means Never” and “The Strange Fruit of Sosnowiec,” my model analysis of a page of Art Spiegelman’s graphic memoir Maus. Before class on Monday, March 2, read and annotate “Wait Means Never,” which you will receive a copy of today, and read the page of Maus that is posted in the readings folder on Blackboard. As you read the page, make note in your journal of the elements of the page you would address if you were writing an analysis of it.

Next Up

Wordplay Day! To prepare for class, revisit the Dictionary and World Builder pages on the Scrabble website and review the blog posts devoted to Scrabble.

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ENG 1103: Looking Ahead to Your Analysis Revision

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Rosenwasser, David, and Jill Stephen. “Focus on Individual Words and Senetnces.” Writing Analytically, 9th edition. Wadsworth/Cengage, 2024. pp. 48-49. 

In Writing Analytically, David Rosenwasser and Jill Stephen recommend “focus[ing] on individual sentences and short passages and build[ing] up a knowledge base from there” (48). The paragraphs that follow demonstrate how developing your understanding of a text through your close examination of individual words enables you to develop an analysis of it.

Suppose you are writing about Michael Lewis’s “Back Story” and are examining the words “[f]our Mississippi”(21). You might be drawn to the fact that Lewis withholds those words for several pages, rather than presenting them shortly after the previous counts in the Redskins’ play—one, two, and three Mississippi–which he documents in the opening paragraph of the chapter. You might ask yourself why he withholds “[f]our Mississippi”(21), and answer with these words:

Doing that allows him to develop the backstory.

Although the statement above answers your question, it does so in very general terms. To develop the idea, state specifically what that is, which is delaying the resumption of the chapter’s opening scene:

Delaying the resumption of the chapter’s opening scene for several pages allows Lewis to develop the backstory.

Noting that backstory is the title of the chapter and stating what the backstory is develops the sentence more:

Delaying the resumption of the chapter’s opening scene for several pages allows Lewis to develop the backstory of the title: how Lawrence Taylor redefined the running back position and fundamentally changed the game of football.

The sentence above fleshes out the idea of the original nine-word sentence and nearly quadruples its length.

As you revise your analysis, follow the same steps to develop your ideas.

Tomorrow, when I return your drafts with my annotations, you will also receive a handout with general notes. An additional copy of those notes is included below.

Analysis Draft Notes

  • The opening paragraph of your essay should be a summary that leads to your thesis statement. Remember that summaries are objective by nature. If you comment in any way on the quality of your subject (the text you are writing about), you turn from summary to commentary or analysis. That should not occur until you present your thesis statement, which will follow the summary.
  • Summaries are written in the third person. No singular or plural first- or second-person pronouns should appear in your summary. In other words, you should not use the words “I,” “me,” “you,” “we,” or “us.” MLA style requires the use of the present tense in writing about literature and other pieces of writing that are sources of study.
  • On first reference, refer to the author by first and last name. On subsequent references, refer to the author by last name, not first.
  • Text is a blanket term for all your readings. When you are referring to a particular reading, do not use a blanket term. Instead, identify by type: essay, chapter, chapter excerpt, or magazine article excerpt.
  • MLA style requires the use of the present tense in writing about literature and other works that are sources of study. Write Sedaris meditates on, not Sedaris meditated on. For more on writing in the present tense, see MLA’s notes on writing in the present tense.
  • Do not foreground the words page and paragraph in your sentences. In other words, do not write, on page twenty-two. . . . Page and paragraph numbers are for parenthetical citations.
  • Once you begin your analysis, you may use first person, but MLA’s editors and your textbook’s authors recommend that you use first-person sparingly, if you use it at all. If you find it difficult to write in third person, compose your analysis in its entirety in first person, then afterward try recasting it in third person. For more on the person question (to write I or not), see Writing Analytically (415-16) and MLA’s notes on using I.
  • In your drafts, some of you presented ideas that you heard in class as if they were your own, which is a form of plagiarism. If you mention an idea that I presented in class, you should introduce the idea with a signal phrase, such as this: As Professor Jane Lucas has observed, the narrator Edgar’s apparent detachment may stem from his grief. The signal phrase is in past tense because it refers to a statement from a previous class, but Edgar’s verb is present tense (stem, not stemmed) because of the present-tense MLA rule. Again, see
  • If you paraphrase a statement of mine from class, include the following work-cited entry at the end of your revision. You will need to consult your class notes to identify the correct date.

Lucas, Jane. English 1103: Academic Research and Writing. 4 February 2026, High Point University.

  • If you quote or paraphrase an idea from our class notes, the same rule applies. The work cited entry for a blog post appears below.

Lucas, Jane. “ENG 1103: ‘The School’ Follow-Up.” Jane Lucas, 5 Feb. 2026, https://janelucas.com/2026/02/05/eng-1103-the-school-follow-up-3/.

  • Do not use the phrase in conclusion or any variation on it at the beginning of the final paragraph of your essay. While that transitional phrase can be useful in a speech (because the audience cannot see that the end is near), there is no reason to write those words when readers can see for themselves that only one paragraph remains. For more, see Harvard University Writing Center’s notes on conclusions.

Next Up

At the beginning of class on Wednesday, I will return your handwritten analyses drafts with my notes, and I will conduct a check of your journal exercise on the first paragraph of Tom Junod’s “The Falling Man.” Afterward, you will have the remainder of the class period to begin revising on your laptops and tablets. The due date for posting your revised analysis to Blackboard and to your WordPress blog is Wednesday, March 4 (before class). The hard deadline is Friday, March 6 (before class).

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ENG 1103: Writing Your Midterm Reflection

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Today in class you will plan and compose a midterm reflective essay that documents your work in the first half of the semester, focusing on two or three assignments or aspects of the course that have contributed to your development as a writer and a student. Since you have already written a reflection devoted solely to your literacy narrative, your midterm reflection should focus primarily on other assignments or aspects of the course, including the following:

  • Keeping a journal
  • Studying one of the readings examined class, including “Me Talk Pretty One Day,” “The Day Language Came into My Life,” “Letter from Birmingham Jail,” the excerpt from Chapter One of To Kill a Mockingbird, “The School,” “Back Story,” and the excerpt from “The Falling Man.”
  • Reading and editing samples of student writing
  • Creating and maintaining a WordPress blog and writing for an online audience beyond the classroom.
  • Collaborating with your classmates on in-class writing assignments
  • Playing Scrabble and collaborating with your teammates on Wordplay Day
  • Writing longhand
  • Limiting screen time

Include in your refelective essay the following elements:

  • A title that offers a window into your reflection
  • An opening paragraph that introduces your focus and presents your thesis
  • Body paragraphs that offer concrete details from your work to support your claims
  • One relevant quotation from one of the readings listed above or from Writing Analytically
  • A signal phrase and a parenthetical citation for the quotation. Consult your class handouts for models. If you include the author’s name in the sentence, include only the page number or the abbreviation par. and the paragraph number in the parenthetical citation. If you do not name the author in the sentence, include his or her name and the page number or the abbreviation par. and the paragraph number.
  • A conclusion that revisits the thesis without restating it verbatim
  • A work cited entry for the text that you quote

Sample MLA Works Cited Entries

Barthelme, Donald. “The School.” The Best American Short Stories 1975, edited by Martha Foley, Houghton Mifflin, 1975. pp. 8-11.

Junod, Tom. “The Falling Man.” Esquire, vol. 140, no. 3, Sept. 2003, pp. 176+. Gale Academic OneFile Select, https://link.gale.com/apps/doc/A106423422/EAIM?u=hpu_main&sid=bookmark-EAIM&xid=ce48797f.

Keller, Helen. “The Day Language Came into My Life.” https://janelucas.com/wp-content/uploads/2025/08/a0461-3.thedaylanguagecameintomylife_keller.pdf

King, Martin Luther, Jr. “Letter from Birmingham Jail.” California State University, Chico. https://www.csuchico.edu/iege/_assets/documents/ susi-letter-from-birmingham-jail.pdf.

Lee, Harper. Chapter One. To Kill a Mockingbird. Lippincott, 1960. pp. 9-19.

Lewis, Michael. “Back Story.” The Blind Side. 2006. Norton, 2009. pp.15-23.

Rosenwasser, David and Jill Stephen. “‘Interesting,’ ‘Revealing,’ ‘Strange.’” Writing Analytically, 9th edition. Wadsworth/Cengage, 2024. p. 24. 

Rosenwasser, David and Jill Stephen. “On Keeping a Writer’s Notebook.” Writing Analytically, 9th edition. Wadsworth/Cengage, 2024. pp. 157-58. 

Rosenwasser, David and Jill Stephen. “Seems to Be About X, But Could Also Be (Or is ‘Really’) About Y.’” Writing Analytically, 9th edition. Wadsworth/Cengage, 2024. pp. 104-7. 

Sedaris, David. “Me Talk Pretty One Day.” Me Talk Pretty One Day. Little, Brown, 2000. 166-73.

Note that unlike the works cited entries above, the one on your midterm reflection will have a hanging indent, as will all of the works cited entries in the Microsoft Word files and PDFs that you post to Blackboard.

The complete midterm reflection assignment, along with the grade criteria, is included on the assignment handout that you will receive in class.

Next Up

At the beginning of class on Wednesday, I will return your handwritten analyses drafts with my notes, and I will conduct a check of your journal exercise on the first paragraph of Tom Junod’s “The Falling Man.” Afterward, you will have the remainder of the class period to begin revising on your laptops and tablets. The due date for posting your revised analysis to Blackboard and to your WordPress blog is Wednesday, March 4 (before class). The hard deadline is Friday, March 6 (before class).

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ENG 1103: Preparing for Your Midterm Reflection

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Monday in class, you will plan and compose a midterm reflective essay that documents your work in the first half of the semester, focusing on two or three assignments or aspects of the course that have contributed to your development as a writer and a student. Since you have already written a reflection devoted solely to your literacy narrative, your midterm reflection should focus primarily on other assignments or aspects of the course. One of the requirements of the assignment is incorporating a relevant quotation from one of the texts we have studied or from Writing Analytically. Before Monday’s class, determine what phrase, clause, or sentence you will quote, and draft a sentence in your journal that introduces the quotation with a signal phrase and follows it with a parenthetical citation.

One option for integrating a quotation into your essay is to include a line from one of your readings and explain what that passage has taught you about writing.

Examples

  • In the opening line of “Back Story,” Michael Lewis demonstrates that repetition can be an asset. With the words “[f]rom the snap of the ball to the snap of the first bone” (15), he repeats “snap” as a frame for the seconds leading up to Jo Theismannn’s career-ending injury. The first “snap,” the hike of the football, begins the sequence. The second “snap,” the fracture of Theismann’s tibia and fibula, ends it.
  • The opening line of “Back Story,” demonstrates that repetition can be an asset. The two prepositional phrases “[f]rom the snap of the ball to the snap of the first bone” (Lewis 15), repeat “snap” as a frame for the seconds leading up to Jo Theismannn’s career-ending injury. The first “snap,” the hike of the football, begins the sequence. The second “snap,” the fracture of Theismann’s tibia and fibula, ends it.

The two examples above are very similar. The first one names the author, so only the page number appears in the parenthetical citation. The second does not name the author, so his last name precedes the page number in the parenthetical citation. Notice how omitting the author’s name from the passage shifts the emphasis from the writer’s actions (“he repeats ‘snap’”) to the words themselves (“prepositional phrases . . . repeat ‘snap’”).

Another option for integrating a quotation into your essay is to include a line from Writing Analytically that presents a concept that figures in your own reading or writing process.

Examples

  • The observation that “understandings are rarely simple and overt” (Rosenwasser and Stephen 104) led me to reexamine “The School” and reenvision it. No longer was it primarily a chronicle of deaths, but instead it was a narrative about the nature of storytelling itself.
  • David Rosenwasser and Jill Stephens’ observation that “understandings are rarely simple and overt” (104) led me to reexamine “The School” and reenvision it. No longer was it primarily a chronicle of deaths, but instead it was a narrative about the nature of storytelling itself.

Works Cited

Lewis, Michael. “Back Story.” The Blind Side. 2006. Norton, 2009. pp. 15-23.

Rosenwasser, David, and Jill Stephen. “Seems to Be About X, But Could Also Be (Or is ‘Really’) About Y.’” Writing Analytically, 9th edition. Wadsworth/Cengage, 2024. pp. 104-7. 

Happy Valentine’s Day Eve!

Today in class, you will receive a red paper heart on a lace doily for an informal writing exercise: composing a valentine for someone.

Next Up

In class on Monday, you will compose your midterm reflection. To prepare, choose a phrase, clause, or sentence from one of the course readings–one that is relevant to your work in the course–and draft in your journal a short passage that connects those words to your writing. That passage will serve as part of your reflection. 

Postscript

Bonus Assignment: Publish your completed Valentine as a post on your blog before 9 a.m. on Monday, February 16, and you will earn a bonus assignment credit in the short assignments/participation category. You are welcome to include a photo caption or a brief explanation of the Valentine, but that is not required. The photograph alone will suffice. Once you have published your post, email me so I can visit your site and credit you with the assignment.

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ENG 1103: “The Falling Man” . . .

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Photo Credit: Richard Drew https://www.esquire.com/news-politics/a48031/the-falling-man-tom-junod/

Tom Junod’s “The Falling Man”

Yesterday in class, before you began composing your analysis draft, we examined the beginning of Tom Junod‘s article “The Falling Man,” published in Esquire magazine two years after 9-11. One of the elements that we considered–and one that I asked you to address later in your journal–is the unusually long first paragraph.

The authors of Writing Analytically recommend that “[i]f you find a paragraph growing longer than half a page–particularly if it is your opening or second paragraph–find a place to make a paragraph break” (Rosenwasser and Stephen 308). Junod does not follow that advice. He opts instead to open his article with a paragraph of more than four hundred words.

If Junod had chosen to divide the first paragraph, where might he have divided it?

Work Cited

Rosenwasser, David, and Jill Stephen. “The Idea of the Paragraph.”Writing Analytically, 9th edition. Wadsworth/Cengage, 2024. pp. 307-313. 

“The Falling Man” presents you with a seventh option for your analysis. (The others six are “MeTalk Pretty One Day,” “The Day Language Came into Life,” “Letter from Birmingham Jail,” the excerpt from the first chapter of To Kill a Mockingbird,” “The School,” and “Back Story.”)

If you would like to analyze more of Junod’s article than the first paragraph and the beginning of the second, you are welcome to study a larger section, just as you are welcome to examine a larger section of the first chapter of To Kill a Mockingbird. The complete first chapter of Harper Lee’s novel is posted in Blackboard. To access all of Junod’s article, see the directions below.

Unless you subscribe to Esquire, the magazine’s paywall will deny you access to the full text of “The Falling Man,” but you can access it through the HPU Library site by following these steps:

Directions for Accessing “The Falling Man” (Full Text)

  1. Go to the HPU Library site.
  2. Under the heading Search HPU Libraries . . . , click on the Articles tab.
  3. Under the Articles tab, type Tom Junod “Falling Man” Esquire in the search box and click search.
  4. On the next screen, you will see a brief summary of the article. Click View full text to see the complete article.
  5. On the next screen, click View full text beside one of the database options.

. . . Constant Consonants? Hmm

Learning phpht and hmm, pictured above, and other all-consonant words can enable you to continue a Scrabble game when you are faced with a rack without vowels.

  • brr: used to indicate that one is cold
  • crwth: an ancient stringed instrument (pl. -s)
  • cwm: a cirque (a deep, steepwalled basin on a mountain, pl. -s, prounounced to rhyme with “boom”)
  • hm: used to express thoughtful consideration (also “hmm“)
  • mm: used to express assent or satisfaction
  • nth: describing an unspecified number in a series
  • phpht: used as an expression of mild anger or annoyance (also “pht“)
  • psst: used to attract someone’s attention
  • sh: used to urge silence (also “shh” and “sha“)
  • tsk: to utter an exclamation of annoyance (-ed, -ing, -s)
  • tsktsk: to “tsk” (-ed, -ing, -s)

Next Up

Wordplay Day! To prepare for class, revisit the Dictionary and World Builder pages on the Scrabble website, or the Merriam-Webster Scrabble Word Finder page, and review the blog posts with Scrabble tips, including this one

Coming Soon

In class on Monday, you will compose a midterm reflection focusing on the assignments and aspects of the course that have contributed the most to your development as a writer and a student. Tomorrow’s post will serve as a guide for your preparations.

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ENG 1103: Beginning Your Analysis

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This morning, you will begin planning and drafting your analysis, your second major assignment for the semester. In class, you will receive a hard copy of the instructions, which are also included below.

Overview

A textual analysis aims to demonstrate how a text works, how it achieves its effects. The process of writing your analysis will include these steps:

  • Summarizing the text precisely so the reader can envision it. Note that your analysis is not a summary but will begin with one that will serve as a lead-in to your thesis or main claim: what you think the text achieves or what it means and how it conveys its meaning.
  • Paying close attention to details, what they imply, and how they relate to each other and the whole
  • Explaining what the text means or what it achieves

Directions for Planning and Drafting

  • Review the texts that you have read for class, and determine which one interests you most as a subject of analysis. You are not permitted to read any of the texts on screen during your drafting period today. (Yesterday’s class notes specify that if you were missing one of the reading handouts or decided to analyze a larger section of Chapter One of To Kill a Mockingbird, you should have printed a copy.)
  • Identify elements in the text that contribute to its effectiveness. (See the list of elements below.)
  • Develop your analysis through a close examination of those elements.
  • Write in dark ink, preferably black.
  • Double-space to allow for my annotations in between. You are welcome to use both sides of the page.
  • Before you leave class today, staple this handout on top of your draft and submit it to me. Next Wednesday, I will return your draft with notes, and you will have the class period to begin revising and editing on your laptop or tablet.

Elements for Textual Analysis

  • Language and Stylistic Devices: Literary devices (metaphors, irony, symbolism), diction (word choice), and syntax (sentence structure).
  • Content and Themes: Recurring ideas, patterns, or points of contrast.
  • Structure: Organization, including scene structure, and how it adheres to or breaks from convention.
  • Characterization (for fiction only, which includes To Kill a Mockingbird and “The School”): Character development, motivation, and their role in the story.

Directions for Revising

The revision of your analysis should include the following:

  • A title that offers a window into your analysis
  • An introduction that presents a summary of the text
  • A thesis statement, or main claim, that presents your take on the text based on your close study of it
  • Textual evidence that supports your claims
  • A minimum of two relevant quotations from the text, introduced with signal phrases and followed by parenthetical citations
  • A conclusion that revisits the thesis without restating it verbatim
  • A work cited entry 
  • A minimum of 600 words

Sample Works Cited Entries

Barthelme, Donald. “The School.” The Best American Short Stories 1975, edited by Martha Foley. Houghton Mifflin, 1975. pp. 8-11.

Junod, Tom. “The Falling Man.” Esquire, vol. 140, no. 3, Sept. 2003, pp. 176+. Gale Academic OneFile Select, https://link.gale.com/apps/doc/A106423422/EAIM?u=hpu_main&sid=bookmark-EAIM&xid=ce48797f.

Keller, Helen. “The Day Language Came into My Life.” https://janelucas.com/wp-content/uploads/2025/08/a0461-3.thedaylanguagecameintomylife_keller.pdf.

King, Martin Luther, Jr. “Letter from Birmingham Jail.” California State University, Chico. https://www.csuchico.edu/iege/_assets/documents/susi-letter-from-birmingham-jail.pdf.

Lee, Harper. Chapter One. To Kill a Mockingbird. Lippincott, pp. 9-19.

Lewis, Michael. “Back Story.” The Blind Side. 2006. Norton, 2009, pp. 15-23.

Sedaris, David. “Me Talk Pretty One Day.” Me Talk Pretty One Day. Little Brown, 2000. pp. 166-73.

Think of your preliminary draft as your down draft; your aim in the first stage of the process is to get your ideas down on the page. You may need to go through the process of drafting to discover what you think the text achieves or what it means and how it conveys that meaning.

Directions for Formatting and Posting Your Revision—See the Course Calendar for the Due Date and Hard Deadline

  1. Save your revised essay as a Microsoft Word file or PDF and submit it to Blackboard in compliance with MLA manuscript guidelines.
  2. Publish your revision as a blog post. In your post, omit the first-page information included in your file submitted to Blackboard (your name, course, section, instructor’s name, and date). Add to your blog post an image that documents some part of your writing process away from the screen, such as a photo of your reading notes or a page of your draft. Also add to your blog post an embedded link to a relevant website.

Grade Criteria

  • An A analysis complies with all assignment guidelines, demonstrates a depth of understanding by using relevant and accurate detail, and is also well organized and relatively free of surface errors.
  • A B analysis complies with all assignment guidelines and presents an adequate analysis but examines little more than what was addressed in class. A B analysis is also well organized and relatively free of surface errors.
  • A C analysis complies with most but not all assignment guidelines and may also be flawed by issues of organization and/or surface errors, or more consequential factual errors.
  • A D analysis complies with only a few of the assignment guidelines and may also be flawed by issues of organization and/or surface errors, or more consequential factual errors.
  • An F analysis fails to comply with most or all assignment guidelines. It may also be flawed by substantial issues of organization and/or surface errors, or more consequential factual errors.

MLA Style

Look to my sample assignments on Blackboard as models of MLA style. For more information on MLA style, see the MLA Style Center and OWL sites linked to my blog and the January 15 class notes devoted to MLA style.

Next Up

Wordplay Day! To prepare for class, revisit the Scrabble Dictionary and World Builder pages or the Merriam-Webster Scrabble Word Finder page, and review the blog posts devoted to Scrabble tips.